Project one, Scene one script!

heres what i have done for this simple first scene. things can be added easily since i havent specified who says what.
your input will be greatly appreciated.
amount of ponies in script: 4 (with a possible 5th)

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Dialogue script scene 1

Dialogue script scene 1

Pinky: (to self)*Exited Crazy* Oh, this video is going to be AWSOME! Its going to be the most bestest most fantastical improba-logical Super-wobble-obstical most fan-dooz-a-ling video I have ever made, and I have not made a lot of videos, in fact.. I don't think I've ever made a video. I might of made one, um. last friday? or was that a cake... last friday? no. yes? no. yes? *sudden stop*

*Dashie creeps over pinkyss shoulder slowly with creep sound*

Dashie: watcha blabbering on about there pinky?

Pinky: (startled): AH! Nothing, just a… nothing! *mutters real quick: super-awesome-video*

Dashie: *attitude* Do you mind... (Dash snatches the video) Showing it to us? HEY GUYS PINKY WANTS TO SHOW US A VIDEO SHE MADE.

Pinky: BUT ITS NOT READY!

*crowd of ponies charge in with excitement*

Rarity: Ooohhhh, I see. Is it… one of another one of THOSE videos then..? *Emphasize on wink* (zoomed)

Apple Jack: OH! So that’s what your hiding from us.

Pinky: What! Noooooo. It just needs more.. tweaking. A little paz-has! Ya know, some fine tuning in the editorial department. and maybe a jazz band... or a puppy. so don’t get too excited.

Dashie: sure sure, whatever you say, pinky.

Rarity: Well then, since it’s not finished yet, can we at least help finish whatever it is you have there..?

Apple Jack: Oh ya, that’s a great idea! Lets see what you have so far pinky.

Dash: Comon, play the thing already!

Pinky: Okay okay, jeez... Don't get your pritzle in a snitzle, I'm doing it already. *mutter: some ponys.*

(Grabs tape from dash)
*as soon as Pinky presents the Tape, all goes silent*
All ponies: OOOOUUUUUHH

*action shot of Pinkie inserting the tape and pressing the remote button*

*zoom to tv*
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(scene one complete

BUCK YEAH!

i put a lot of emphasis on the action shots to prolonge the animation and add more than just speaking

Now over to the voice actors. \Thread

ybcrazy wrote:heres what i have done for this simple first scene. things can be added easily since i havent specified who says what.
your input will be greatly appreciated.
amount of ponies in script: 4 (with a possible 5th)

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Dialogue script scene 1

P1: (to self) this video is going to be AWSOME!!!!
*p2 creeps over p1s shoulder slowly with creep sound*
P2: watcha screamin about there p1?
P1 (startled): AH! Nothing, just a…secret video.
P2: mind showing it to us? HEY GUYS P1 WANTS TO SHOW US A VIDEO SHE/HE MADE.
*crowd of ponies charge in with excitement*
P3: That’s sooooo cool! Is it…one of THOSE videos. *Emphasize on wink* (zoomed)
P4: OH! So that’s what your hiding from us.
P1: It’s not that kind of thing…I swear. It’s not done yet so don’t get too excited.
P2: sure sure, I believe you.
P3: Since it’s not done yet, can we help complete it?
P4: Oh ya, that’s a great idea!
*all ponies mumble loudly creating an uproar of ideas*
*as soon as P1 presents “The” Tape, all goes silent*
All ponies: OOOOUUUUUHH
*action shot of P1 inserting the tape and pressing the remote button*
*zoom to tv*
(scene one complete)

i put a lot of emphasis on the action shots to prolonge the animation and add more than just speaking
hope it didn't bore you!

I love it... I'll give each pony a name and see what the voice actors can come up with!

i'm glad you like it...i'm not a comedian but inserting that sexual inuendo was unavoidable XD

i'm almost done (90%) doing the design for the menu bar on the main site including rainbow dash flying down

You sir, are awesome.. keep doing what your doing 'coz your doing it right.